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Stephen Pribut's avatar

Another vote for writing as quickly as the “Dickens”

john sundman's avatar

Thank you. I read that thing a dozen times before posting it and as soon as I posted it I found three typos. Sigh.

EDWARD WATKINS's avatar

Please get Part 2 out to us ASAP. Quite a story so far.

Bev Foley's avatar

Love this quick read but PLEASE get to “Part 2” quickly!

Charlie Brown's avatar

Well done John. Great take on friendship and life's crossroads.

Chris J. Karr's avatar

Looking forward to the next part!

Lucian K. Truscott IV's avatar

You said the date was "2003" in "Very slowly and then all at once," when you're writing about 1974.